P4

Professional Hollywood Letter

To improve my script I am going to improve the pacing of the story by making the story tighter and the dialogue much more focused. I will also touch up any formatting errors that I have made as well as making the script less novelistic in its descriptions and having it follow the correct screenplay formatting. Lastly, I will make sure to include more set up and foreshadowing in the beginning of the story so as to make the events that happen at the end of the script make more sense and have an impact.